A glimpse beyond - a short story about death and hope
- Noona

- Feb 27
- 3 min read
Updated: Feb 28
I could feel the warmth of my blood slipping away, a fleeting river escaping the wounds carved into my flesh. It pooled beneath me, seeping into the cracks of the cold, unyielding ground. The contrast was almost poetic—the heat of life departing while the air around me chilled, wrapping me in the final embrace of death.
Death. The word had always been painted in shadow, whispered in terror by those who clung to their fragile existence. But for me, it was something different. It was quiet. Peaceful. A sweet escape from the nightmare that had been my life. I welcomed it, surrendering to the silence, unburdened by fear or regret.
A strange sensation washed over me then—a weightlessness, a separation. My pain ebbed away, and in its place, I felt… free. My soul drifted, lifting from the broken vessel that was my body. I had imagined this moment would be filled with sorrow, with longing for the life I was leaving behind. But there was none of that. Only the strange, almost beautiful sensation of release.
Then came the light.

It wasn’t the sterile, blinding brilliance I had expected from stories of the afterlife. No, this light was different—warm, pulsing, alive. It reached out to me, wrapping around me like unseen hands, pulling me from the abyss. I should have been afraid, but there was something in the way it embraced me that felt… familiar.
My ascent slowed, and for the first time since I had begun to slip away, I became aware of another presence. A force—no, a being—loomed above me, its presence vast yet intimate. The shadows that had once clawed at my dying form recoiled from the radiance it exuded. I tried to focus, to see, but my vision was blurred, as if I were peering through a dream.
“Not yet.”
The voice was deep, resonant, carrying the weight of something ancient and undeniable. It was not a command, not a plea, but a truth woven into the very fabric of existence. The moment those words were spoken, I felt it—a pull, a tether reconnecting me to my shattered body.
Pain surged through me like a tidal wave, dragging me under. I gasped, the act of breathing foreign and violent as my lungs seized, desperate for air. My body convulsed, limbs trembling as they struggled to reawaken. The warmth that had been slipping away now rushed back, igniting my veins with a sensation I had thought lost forever—life.
My eyes fluttered open, and the world came into view. No longer the desolate, blood-stained battlefield I had succumbed to, but something else entirely. I was cradled in the arms of someone—no, something—otherworldly. His presence was undeniable, his form wreathed in a faint glow, as though the earth itself had sculpted him into being.
But it was his eyes that held me captive.
Caramel. Deep and endless, swirling with something both ancient and kind. They weren’t the indifferent gaze of fate, nor the cold, calculating stare of those who had tormented me. No, these eyes were different. They saw me. Not as a pawn, not as a sacrifice, but as something… worth saving.
I swallowed, my throat raw and aching, but my mind clearer than it had been in what felt like an eternity. I was alive. And for the first time in a long time, I wasn’t sure if that was a curse or a gift.
His hand, warm and steady, tightened around mine, grounding me to this fragile moment between death and life. I should have questioned it all—the why, the how—but as I stared into those eyes, the questions faded, replaced by something simpler, quieter.
Hope.
A shaky breath escaped my lips as I whispered, “Maybe it’s worth staying a little bit longer.”
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